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It is not LOOSE. it is LOSE. It is when you do not WIN.
ONE O.
LOOSE is the opposite of TIGHT it is NOT to be MISTAKEN for LOSE.
AUGH.
..(sorry. just has been getting on my nerves for a very long time, although the only places I see it is in anime---maybe it's a quirk, but it's a very bad one.)
As for the comic itself, it looks very cute and I can tell the amount of attention you gave it payed off.
Anyway you have really captured the bright hope of a drow wanting to make a new life on the surface, the style only emphasises the innosence and wonder, like a child new to the world and trying to learn anything they can and unaware of anything evil or negitive about the world around them. Awsome job, I gotta admit I love it.
You would do a marvolous job on an own comic. really^^